Quibbons Quill

Hey, I'd really appreciate any comments from someone, that gives me things to work on, opinions, criticisms, praise or really anything that isn't just copying and pasting my work onto ...

Thanks a lot for the Critique, this was basically built around a vague idea i had about imagination being the breath of life. The rest was added in later, i've ...

Thanks a lot, i've mademost of the changes you've suggested and take on bored, with shame, the criticism that is was first drafty, I have a poor eye for mistakes ...

thanks the fighting part was added in later and that is probably why it falls behind the other parts. I'm really keen on this story, next part up soon

Thanks a lot for your reviews. They have really helped and i have made some of the changes suggested. The next part of the story should be up soon after ...